Living Literately and Mindfully at the Intersection of Mother Nature, the Animal World and Poetry

BY PEGGY S. RICE

Consider...

Live in each season as it passes; breathe the air, drink the drink, taste the fruit, and resign yourself to the influences of each. Be blown on by all the winds.  Open all your pores and bathe in all the tides of nature, in all her streams and oceans, at all seasons. Grow green with spring, yellow and ripe with autumn.  For all Nature is doing her best each moment to make us well.  She exists for no other end. Do not resist her.

Henry David Thoreau, August 23, 1853

Poetry! There is no other genre like it in the world.  A good poem can take you places you never thought possible, wake you up, shake you, make your every emotion quake with excitement and awe.  Writing poetry is taking a subject---be it a pigeon or a Popsicle—breathing new life into it, letting readers know they never experienced a moment such as this before.

Lee Bennett Hopkins, 2009.

Make the Earth Your Companion 
--J. Patrick Lewis

Make the Earth your companion. 
Walk lightly on it, as other creatures do. 
Let the Sky paint her beauty—she is always watching over you. 
Learn from the Sea how to face harsh forces. 
Let the River remind you that everything will pass. 
Let the Lake instruct you in stillness. 
Let the mountain teach you grandeur. 
Make the woodland your house of peace. 
Make the Rainforest your house of hope. 
Meet the Wetland on twilight ground. 
Save some small piece of Grassland for a red kite on a windy day. 
Watch the Icecaps glisten with crystal majesty. 
Hear the Desert whisper hush to eternity. 
Let the Town weave a small basket of togetherness. 
Make the Earth your companion. 
Walk lightly on it, as other creatures do  

Ruby-throated hummingbird [Public domain USFWA]

Hummingbird jewels
Necks gleaming like red rubies
In the morning light

                   Sarah Rice, 8 years old

Serenity can be found at the intersection of Mother Nature, the animal world and poetry. I have found that the more time I spend at this intersection, the less anxiety I feel. Following are materials and strategies, my students, daughter and I have found successful:

• Writer’s Notebook: The notebook serves as a means to encourage young writers to value writing.  It creates a space for students/writers to save words in the moment; "seeds" for a longer writing project which might be expanded and developed (Calkins, 1994).
• Banish Boring Words (Shelton, 2009): Use as a resource for interesting words.  It provides lists of specific, interesting words for several categories of words, such as sight, sound, smell, taste, touch, action verbs, colors and shapes.
• The Book of Animal Poetry (Lewis, 2012), and the Book of Nature Poetry (Lewis, 2015) Mentor Poems: Before requiring students to write a poem at the intersection of Mother Nature, the animal world and poetry provide students with numerous opportunities to explore mentor poems. NTCE Award Winning Poet and former U.S. Children’s Poet Laureate, J. Patrick Lewis has created the Book of Animal Poetry (Lewis, 2012), and the Book of Nature Poetry (Lewis, 2015) to inspire us to see poetry in the natural world. Each collection includes 200 poems that “squeak, soar and roar” or “float, zoom and bloom.”  Each poem is accompanied by a photograph to experience the wonder of Mother Nature and the Animal World.

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Poetry Performance

I recommend regular poetry breaks that provide students an opportunity to perform a poem of his/her choice.  Repeated reading and poetry performance of a favorite poem can enhance students’ motivation and build/increase fluency skills as well as strengthen reading/writing connections. Renee M. LaTulippe at No River.com provides 5 tips for poetry performance that my students and I have found helpful.

Within the context of repeated readings and poetry performance, discussions about poet’s craft/poetic elements can occur, such as stanzas, use of white space, figurative language (similes, metaphors & imagery), personification, rhyme, rhythm, alliteration, onomatopoeia, assonance, consonance and repetition. Performance of an original poem can provide a moment of pride and peer review of videotaped performances can strengthen literacy skills.

Power of Place

Locate a space surrounded in nature that you can visit regularly.  I am fortunate, because I live on 7 acres with a pond.  When visiting this space, be prepared to engage in mindful listening, see the world with a poet’s eyes and take notes in a writing journal.

• Sit comfortably.
  
• Close your eyes and breath normally for a moment.
  
• Now imagine your belly is a balloon filling up with air and when it is full hold it. (Pause). Now slowly breathe out.
  
• Listen mindfully: What are the sounds of nature? Consider poetic elements, such as figurative language, personification, alliteration, onomatopoeia, assonance, consonance, repetition
  
• Repeat. Deep breath in and hold it. (Pause). Release.
  
• Breathe normally.
  
• In your writing journal, write down the sounds of Nature. See p. 22 and 23 in Banishing Boring Words for some specific interesting sounds
  

• Sit comfortably.
  
• Now imagine your belly is a balloon filling up with air and when it is full hold it. (Pause). Now slowly breathe out.
  
• Relax your body.
  
• Focus your attention on nature for 5 minutes.  What do you see? What do you smell? Hear? What can you touch? When you see a creature, use your imagination.  What would it be like to be this creature?
  
• In your writing journal, write down what you have noticed in nature. Consider poetic elements, such as figurative language (simile, metaphor, imagery), personification, alliteration, onomatopoeia, assonance, consonance, repetition and refer to Banishing Boring Words for some specific interesting words.
  
• Take photograph(s) to capture the moment.
  
• Continue mindful listening and writing as desired.
  

Poetry Writing

Writing poetry is all about playing with words.  Fletcher (2002) encourages us to play with the sounds of words.  Consider, rhythm, rhyme, repetition, onomatopoeia and alliteration. He also encourages us to think fragments/cut unnecessary words, consider shape, use white space/experiment with line breaks and end with a bang/sharpen the ending. Each of these aspects of language can be a topic of minilessons connected to poetry performances of mentor poems.  Lewis (2012, 2015) has included excellent resources for writing formula poems.

Savor...

In Beauty May I Walk
--Anonymous (Navajo Indian)

In beauty may I walk
All day long may I walk
Through the returning seasons may I walk
Beautifully will I possess again
Beautifully birds
Beautifully joyful birds
On the trail marked with pollen may I walk
With grasshoppers about my feet may I walk
With dew about my feet may I walk
With beauty may I walk
With beauty before me may I walk
With beauty behind me may I walk
With beauty above me may I walk
With beauty all around me may I walk
In old age, wandering on a trail of beauty, lively, may I walk.
In old age, wondering on a trail of beauty, living again, may I walk
It is finished in beauty
It is finished in beauty

References

Calkins, L.M. (1994). The art of teaching writing. (2nd ed.). Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann.

Fletcher, R. (2002). Poetry matters: Writing a poem from the inside out. New York: Harper Trophy.

Lewis, J. P. (2015). National geographic book of nature poetry: More than 200 poems with photographs that float, zoom, and bloom! Washington, DC: National Geographic Partners, LLC.

Lewis, J. P. (2012). National geographic book of animal poetry: More than 200 poems with photographs that squeak, soar, and roar! Washington, DC: National Geographic Partners, LLC.

Shelton, L. (2009). Banish boring words. New York: Scholastic

Peggy S. Rice is an Associate Professor of Elementary Education and Faculty Advisor for the Partners in Literacy Council at Ball State University in Muncie Indiana. She is a member of the Children's Literature Assembly Ways and Means Committee.